The doctors said to talk to him like he could hear us. Keep it calm, familiar—music, stories, the usual. So we played his favorite playlist, read old texts out loud, even brought in his favorite hoodie that still smelled like coconut detergent and barbecue smoke.
But he didn’t flinch.
On day three, his vitals spiked right after our aunt leaned in and kissed his forehead. Everyone held their breath. The nurse checked the monitor, then ran out to page someone.
Five minutes later, his eyelids twitched.
It wasn’t a full wake-up. Just a murmur—raspy, slow. But the first thing he said wasn’t Mom. Or his girlfriend. Or even his own name.
He whispered, “Tell Marla I stayed.”
We all looked at each other.
There’s no Marla in our family. No friends named Marla. No coworkers, classmates, nothing. His girlfriend swore she’d never heard the name before. But when we checked his call history from the night of the accident—one unsaved number had called him three times.
All at 2:17 a.m.
When we traced it back, the number was registered to a landline at a closed motel four counties away. The place burned down in 1996. No phone line. No power.
And the weirdest part?
He hadn’t even been near that area. The accident happened in the city. A car clipped him as he was crossing the street. A clean, simple hit-and-run. Nothing supernatural. Nothing dramatic. But now… this?
He woke up fully the next morning. Disoriented, pale, a bit confused—but lucid. The first thing he did was ask for water. The second? “Did you tell Marla?”
Our aunt tried to play it off. “Sweetheart, we don’t know a Marla.”
He just looked at her for a long moment. Then he shook his head slowly, almost like he pitied us. “You wouldn’t.”
Over the next few days, he got stronger. His memory was intact—except for a gap between 10:30 p.m. and the moment he woke up. He didn’t remember getting hit, or even leaving the bar that night. But when we pressed about Marla, he’d go quiet.
One night, I was alone with him. We were watching a re-run of some dumb cooking show, not really talking, just being in the same space. That’s when he spoke up.
“She had red hair,” he said. “And freckles. Not many. Just a few across her nose.”
I muted the TV.
“She smelled like lemons. Wore a necklace with a tiny clock on it. The kind you wind up. She said I had to choose.”
I didn’t want to push him. But he kept going, staring straight ahead.
“She said if I left with her, I wouldn’t hurt anymore. That it would be easy. Like sleep. But I asked—what happens if I stay? She smiled and said, ‘Then you’ll forget me.’”
He finally looked at me.
“But I didn’t want to forget her.”
The room felt too quiet. Like even the machines had stopped humming.
“But who is she?” I asked.
He didn’t answer. Just reached for the remote and turned the volume back up.
That night, I couldn’t sleep. I kept thinking about the motel. The burned-down building. The calls at 2:17 a.m. How does a number from a place that no longer exists make three calls to someone unconscious?
The next day, I drove out there.
It took three hours and a nearly flat tire, but I found it. Just charred wood, crumbling foundation, weeds taller than me. A few pieces of melted sign were still scattered on the ground. You could barely tell it had once been a building.
But something made me walk in.
It was stupid, I know. But curiosity wins when you’ve got no answers.
Inside, it was just ashes and silence. Until I stepped into what must’ve been the lobby. The floor dipped slightly. And right there, against the back wall, was a telephone.
Half melted. Coated in soot. Still attached to a cord that disappeared into the ground.
I reached for it. Just to touch. Just to see.
And the second I did, my phone rang.
I jumped. Almost dropped it.
Unknown number.
I didn’t answer.
Later, when I checked the call log, the time read 2:17 p.m.
Exactly twelve hours off from when the calls came to my cousin.
I didn’t tell anyone. What would I even say?
A few weeks passed. My cousin was discharged and went home. But he wasn’t the same.
He was kinder. Quieter. He’d always been the loud one in the family. The joker. Now he just listened more. Hugged people longer. Smiled softer.
One afternoon, I caught him sitting on the porch, holding a small silver necklace. It had a clock on it.
“You found it?” I asked.
He nodded. “It was in my jacket pocket. The one I was wearing that night.”
We both knew it hadn’t been there before.
I asked again, “Who was she, really?”
He looked off into the distance for a long time before answering.
“I think she waits. For people who are lost between going and staying. She doesn’t push. Just offers peace. But something about her… it wasn’t death. It was… memory.”
He rubbed his thumb over the tiny clock. “She told me a story. About a man who died in that motel. Said he used to fix watches, and his daughter Marla would visit every Sunday. The night of the fire, he called her. Three times. She never picked up. Her phone had died.”
“She blamed herself. She never forgave herself.”
I swallowed hard. “So… what? That story stuck to the place?”
“Maybe. Maybe she stayed. Or maybe she became something else. Something that helps people who are stuck in-between.”
He looked at me then. “I think she saw something in me. That I still had time left. Even when I didn’t believe it.”
I didn’t know what to say.
He smiled. “So I stayed.”
Months went by. My cousin got back on his feet. Got a new job. Started volunteering with a hospice program. Just holding people’s hands. Listening to their last stories.
One day, he asked if I wanted to go with him.
I said yes.
We sat with an older man who was slipping in and out of consciousness. At one point, the man opened his eyes, stared at my cousin, and whispered, “Marla?”
My cousin just smiled and nodded. “Yeah. She says you’re okay to go.”
The man smiled, then closed his eyes for the last time.
I don’t know what I believe.
But I know this—my cousin came back different.
He started fixing old clocks. Said it helped him feel grounded. Gave a few away to people who were struggling.
He gave me one too. A little silver clock necklace.
Said it was for when I felt lost.
Last I checked, that burned motel was finally torn down. But every year on the anniversary of his accident, my cousin leaves a lemon-scented candle where the front desk used to be.
Says it’s to say thank you.
And every time he does, the clock in his hand skips forward by exactly three minutes.
Always three.
When I finally asked him why, he told me something that stuck with me ever since.
“She said it takes three minutes for a memory to become part of who you are. Not just something you remember, but something you carry. And that’s what I chose. To carry her.”
So here’s what I think—
Maybe life throws us into impossible places. Between pain and peace. Between staying and going. And sometimes, someone—or something—helps us find our way back. Helps us stay.
Not because it’s easier.
But because it’s worth it.
And if you’re reading this, maybe you’ve got your own “Marla.” Someone you met in a quiet moment. Someone who reminded you why you’re still here.
Don’t forget them.
Hold onto that memory.
Because the people who stay? They’re the ones who come back kinder. Stronger. More alive.
Like my cousin.
And if that doesn’t make sense, that’s okay.
Some stories aren’t meant to be solved.
Just carried.
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